X Oops!
- Question:
- The citizens of Kingston have gone too long without decent bicycle paths!
- Answer:
- The answer This is an effective sentence is not correct.
- Explanation:
- While the issue of bicycle paths is an important one, the writer has made a serious mistake here by using an exclamatory sentence -- it makes the tone look forced and the writer, insincere. Use an exclamatory sentence only when a point is truly shocking.